初除官蒙裴常侍赠鹘衔瑞草绯袍鱼袋因谢惠贶兼抒离情
新授铜符未着绯,因君装束始光辉。
惠深范叔绨袍赠,荣过苏秦佩印归。
鱼缀白金随步跃,鹘衔红绶遶身飞。
明朝恋别朱门泪,不敢多垂恐污衣。
注释
- 「新授铜符未着绯」: newly appointed with the copper tally but not yet wearing the red robe
- 「因君装束始光辉」: because of your gift, it starts to shine
- 「惠深范叔绨袍赠」: The kindness is as deep as Fan Sui's gift of the silk robe
- 「荣过苏秦佩印归」: More glorious than Su Qin's return with the seal
- 「鱼缀白金随步跃」: The fish-shaped ornament with white metal jumps with each step
- 「鹘衔红绶遶身飞」: The falcon holds the red ribbon and circles around the body
- 「明朝恋别朱门泪」: Tomorrow, when leaving, there will be tears at the rich man's gate
- 「不敢多垂恐污衣」: Dare not shed too many tears for fear of soiling the clothes
赏析
此诗是白居易初除官蒙裴常侍赠物后所作
诗中描述新授官职未着绯袍,因裴常侍的馈赠而光彩照人,‘惠深范叔绨袍赠,荣过苏秦佩印归’尽显感激
‘鱼缀白金随步跃,鹘衔红绶遶身飞’细致描绘赠品
‘明朝恋别朱门泪,不敢多垂恐污衣’则表达出既感恩又不舍的复杂情感,通过对比和生动描写,将受赠的荣耀与离别的伤感展现得淋漓尽致
精选评论
- 「锦心绣口新授铜符,因君装束而光辉,范叔绨袍、苏秦佩印之典用得恰到好处,尽显感恩与荣耀之情。」
- 「兰心蕙质鱼跃鹘飞之景生动,与自身受赠之荣相衬,明朝恋别泪,写出不舍又恐污衣之态,情感细腻。」
- 「风华墨客此诗将受赠之喜与离别之情融合,惠深、荣过之句尽显感激,恋别泪又添几分惆怅。」
- 「灵犀公子以形象笔触描绘受赠之状,鱼袋、鹘衔之描写生动,恋别朱门泪,展现出复杂情感。」
- 「逸韵文人整首诗情感丰富,从新授之喜到对友人的感恩,再到离别之愁,层次分明,韵味悠长。」